would love to hear some real feedback, all is appreciated... sincerely

 

Yikes, sorry but that just sounds like a big mess to me

 

thanks for your feedback
next time i well try to work more cleaning this mess

 

Nice vocals, just try that the "once upon a time" vox sounds a bit clearer so it will be easy to understand what it says (try also to add a ping pong delay just a bit).
I like the percussion progression and since the quality its in 240p cant said that much. I would like to hear the full version as well ;)

 

it is owner to have feedback from Advanced Member seem as you RWND thanks a lot really thanks a lot for your kind words.
i mix it by headphone

thanks again