My Weekend Song-Need Opinion

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by paradise_hell, Jun 18, 2013.

  1. paradise_hell

    paradise_hell Newbie

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    Hi everyone,

    What are the best instruments that fit with this song...Appreciate for any suggestion...
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    A.K.J.B
     
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  3. Me2audio

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    what do you mean ?
    what are he instruments that can be added to the song?

    or

    what instruments in the song fit better the song?

    well, all the instruments that you used in the song are ok,

    the guitar is a bit out of tune , 0:20 to 0:28

    there is also dissonances with the piano and bass.

    is your piano tunned to to A= 442 Hz or A= 440Hz ?

    it´s a good idea for a song, the violin sounds good :wink:

    But you should practice the vocals, there are to many parts where you sing out of tune.

    you have to practice :wink:

    dont take me wrong, thats just my opinion :wink:
     
  4. paradise_hell

    paradise_hell Newbie

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    Me2Audio,

    I just used ezkey, don't know what are the tune 440 or 442hz.

    I guess i need melodyne to fix the vocals & guitar/bass and for th vocals, i need the real vocalist to sing... :rofl:

    Thanks for the opinion...

    See ya! :grooves:
     
  5. ghostinthemachine

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    The best instrument for this song would be a real drummer with real drums. Also, that piano rhythm gets dull after a while, I personally can't tell the difference between the chorus and the verse. Song needs to be structured a little better too. Thats just what I think, peace :mates:
     
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