worst song of the year is for me

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  1. indianwebking

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    before you pack your bags and time travel to the future. give me your 3 minutes so i can totally waste it. he he. you must've never heard this kind of sh*t music before. but bear with it for 3 minutes plz.

    and let me know if we can do something about this or not. this is a 3+ year old project of mine when i was trying to make future bass kinda stuff so don't expect even a thing from it. and also the snare buildup do kinda suck. but i will see what it can be done with in the next year. peace. happy holidays. and come with "not this one" or some related memes plz. totally okay with me.

    also it was made on a c2d comp with 2gb ram and some more sh*t things i don't want to talk about. (used that pc for a decade. let's not talk about that)

     
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    Really like the intro part, and the line coming in. The swells could be lowered a tad to give more ambience.
    The snare at 0:57 is way too over powering though.

    The thing I'm working on now sounds like an ass, but hopefully it'll come together at some stage today. Keep at it :)
     
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    I'm on a crappy laptop, even forgot my headphones, I can't monitor properly, and I don't know this genre much, so judging is difficult.
    I also like the intro very much, got a few cheers while listening, hopefull intro but with a tad melancoly on top.
    I think you're good until 2:09, probably when the beat should go in another direction, well I'm not sure I can't really hear the lead on my setup, its drawn by the drums.
    It's a beat worth salvaging and working on imho, you evolved in three years, sometimes it's very positive to go back on a suspended beat after a long while. That's when you're able to take it somewhere else.
    I listened three times, cause I like it. Didn't feel like wasted time at all. Keep at it man.
     
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    Yes you picked the exact same word as I named it. in the pattern. swells. I will lower them. and also try to add some more ambience if that is needed or also try some buildup drum loops. and add some sweeps and stuff as usual.
     
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    Don't worry. We'll fix all in the mix...

    :winker::rofl:
     
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    Can't access this beat that you made one entire year after indian did his. It says I need authorization or whatever, could you post it in an accesssible format, where we can read it without weird requests ?Had to remove all my ad blockers, I never have to. Even then it doesn't work.
    Cheers.
     
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    @demberto:grooves: ..further you should had put it into a thread of yours not a fresh one like this ...
    imo:dunno:
     
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    remove that first note of piano at start...
     
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    I made this for the censorship team
    So count me in for worst song :)
     
  12. indianwebking

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    Only first note or whole pattern?
     
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    funny idea though. after 1:20 you qualified for the award
     
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    only this first note at start...
    i would..if you like it keep it..
     
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    You could also try to lower the first note a lot.
    First snare is a bit too loud, second too loud.
    Most synths are too far in the background.
    Whole track is too mono.
    All just mix issues, the composition is ok.
     
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    i actually liked it ,its missing the keys that can lift up the tracks
    the finger click fx kinda nice and cool (but it should have been in the beginning only then things picks up from there in my opinion)
    pads are great ,no matter how you play it ,it capture anyone with good musical ears out there

    and heres my advice
    when you do a project like this ,make few versions,different drums/different style
    one of those versions will become your next hit (opps i have to say it because i use nexus 3 now hehehe)

    seriously enough ,its nice fun listen (no wasted time here either and making tracks on pc doesnt mean you are bad in making music
    as i prefer this demo project over any song from rihannas and justin BEAVERS MTV crap they are shoving down our throats for the last 20 years
    and they have full gear/pro studio engineers with them but fail to produce a ''classic song''
    so i support any bedroom producer out there
    ''never stop working ''
    good luck
     
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    @adomanim the tracks you mentioned in your post are best listen to in ''mute''

    its been like 25 years now the US market cant(and will never) produce good songs based on listening only
    there should be a clickbait music videos that can make those A list singers relevant in the business and spend money
    to make the shitty video as cool cinamatic filmography (but with crappy music)

    (and as for B-Z list singers are the ones who copy each other style and therefore there will be no music evolution for them
    as you wont see no good music videos nor hear good music ,even the background girls dance in weird moves (revolution my ass)

    the 'top artists '' of music industury are focusing on shooting more sexual content and despicable act/bad influencing moves
    targeted to the ones sitting at home waiting for new entries and expect something cool
    but instead gets 24 hours of repeated crap from the same producers who just cash in with similar hiphop song
    regardless on how bad the music is been produced ,they just keep on reproducing same crap with more crappy videos

    these type of artists are competing for 'most disgusting music videos ever produced instead of improving their own music
    and its mind boggling to see young people and teenagers pissing in their pants over new songs and go emotional cry over it
    as it remind them of how happy moments (just because they heard similar beat and thats whats important for them similar beats
    and they goe on praising and reviewing the crappy music as it its next big thing without even analyzing the music itself


    ================continue reading but its :bleh:not important:bleh: ===========
    nerd with purple hair :oh it sounded like rihanana music
    big glasses nerd : no its tyler swift tyle ,
    big mama know it all who act like teenager :eh ehe its beyonce but it has different lyrics
    smoking joint afro guy :i like the videoths yo maketh me wanna kith the tv and lick the thcreen eeem em
    youtuber with 100 followers :im gonna review and react to all of ya in my next video
    nerdy beatmaika :i tink i can sample some deese sounds

    for sport :
    Scottish nerd with beer watching barcelona match : this is gross man ,absolutely fncking terrible defense by pique
    .... BUT i ll drink to shakiraaaaa :rofl:
     
  20. I don't have a problem with the track. But to be honest, if you have been working on this for three years, you have a problem. Let it go.
     
  21. indianwebking

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    nah boss,I am not working continuously. it's just an older track which I found luckily and then change few things here and there. not working on it since 2019. and might not work on it for a bit more I guess.
     
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