Yet another track from me. This one has a bit more of a special place in my heart: ----------------------------------------------------------- Here is a poem I wrote which inspired me to write this track... yes, I inspire myself cuz I'm amazing like that... (WARNING THESE AREN'T LYRICS PUT YOUR KARAOKE MIC AWAY) Human Achievement by DNMDG We are. Centuries align when we conquer. I am. Nothing for we are one. We will. Pierce the horizons and sail its borders. I did. Imagine. As we fly the heavens we are kings. Against all others created. You see. Trillions and trillions will see. And feel. Feel how we will soar. And be sure. We will make sure. And we are strong. So make sure you are strong. Don't lose. You are granted will. So choose. Never be less. Never commit to the least. Never rest in the cloud. Our hopes are to the stars. Last edited: Aug 30, 2019
Very nice-- cleansing, inspiring, chill. Are the words meant to be lyrics, or were they the inspiration for the music? What did you use to make it?
Thanks man The words are a poem I wrote which served as inspiration for the track... Just used good old Ableton Live and some plugins :D
very twinkly. extra sparkle. what is the name of the band -- THE BEER HALL PUTSCH ? great start. really made me want to kill and maim minecraft people. the last bit is a bit depressing though. i thought you could try and be a little more inspirational to finish. you know, fill us with a bit of kraft durch freude. as it is, it kind of makes me want to dig a deep hole, sit in it and give up on life.
hehehe thanks, yea man I can't help myself no matter how inspirational I try to be it always ends up leaning towards the more sad side lol! I guess I'm just a damaged soul...
I was waiting on the front stoop for hours just for that vocal part which never came. I am devastated.
eeek. Sorry, I should've probably mentioned it was a poem... I hope u didn't have a karaoke mic out or something...
Nice! Gets more interesting the more you listen to it. Thanks for sharing it... but I must say that am a bit disappointed. I was expecting also for this track to be accompanied by a video of you showing ( . ) ( . )
This track is simply powerful and incredibly well executed. An exquisite reflection of the poem, musically as powerful as Man Without Country. My criticism is singularly directed at the chords starting at 2:28, they are the final and necessary shine of the climax and simultaneously diminish the magic of this piece because of they're lack of timing variety. I highly recommend you add some groove there and a randomizer like Replicant, I believe Abelton has such tools already in stock. I am glad I opened this subforum today, excellent work! Last edited: Aug 30, 2019
Wow thank you so much man, means alot to me after long hours trying to make something work . I totally get what you mean about 2:28, I was thinking that myself at one point where I felt like it needed its own groove rather than just playing straight bars but I guess I decided it was fine. I know the tool as well in Ableton used it on another track ;) But thanks for the kind words and constructive feedback <3
well nice synth shizzle... very good tension and emotion...the 1:10 and and 1:50 transition sounds very well on cheap laptop speakers... but after putting on headphones i must say youre drums suck...the orchester bass drum whatever is just mud and the snare sounds in background and to silent --------------------------- ---------- i got 2 browsers one of them doesnt ignore you damn....
Diversion for the Synth. Toneboosters stuff. Live stock plugins. Honestly that’s pretty much it. Oh and waves C4 Multiband...
hey I just want to say. i hate you. because you're ignoring me in chat otherwise a good track. i will share my track also. it's just i don't have mixing headphones so i have to send my master to my friend or send ss of the eq. or send wav so i can edit & re-edit till the final version is done.
Very smart composition, emotional, modern sounds, complex structure, well-thought-out ideas behind it, evocative, ... .
