hello notsoloud
Nice One!
its definitely a dancy track ..got me head rockin'
Few suggestions ...Maybe the intro should be a breakdown .. start the track from around .50.
The other thing i feel there are too many breaks later on also u're impacts are a little weak in the intro u could layer a deep thud like sound..
The ambient notes/melody really rock...super patch
Not a slamin' edm tune but yeah a good one early in the night
I like the track ..this is like the stuff i'm makin now
cheers

 

At first listen it sounded low, but then I raised the volume and then it sounded dope. Liked it a lot!

 

It sounds nice on my screen on board speakers,I like a lot the mood.Awesome!

 

It sounds low because I'm scared of No Avenger telling me not to exceed 14 LUFS! Or is it minus 14? I can feel a panic attack coming!!

 

Can we know which synths and reverbs did you use for this track,if you remember?

 

@notsoloud Terrific song. Can be even better if you work on its structure. As it is right now, structurally this song is all over the place. Structure plays a big part in how much impact your track has. As a dance tune the build up is not there because of the way each part interacts dynamically with the other. As way of comparison, I would go no further than All things Inside my head. On that song you knew where you were going structurally.

 

For good reason!
Now, who is saying a tree must be bent while it's young? This ancient tree is as flexible as a 12 year old female floor gymnast.

When I turned it up, it became really punchy (my neighbours across the street can confirm it - still too hot to close the window, sorry) and this is how we love it.

Up to 0:48 it's ... what's the political correct term again ... now I got it ...interesting and defo just electronic.
Up to 1:54 its a bit EDM but afterwards, .
So, skipping that experimental Pacman intro sounds like a good idea to me (but don't delete it, you never know what you can use it for).

In total it's defo a from me.

And btw, it's -14LUFS (JC, how difficult can this be? ).

 

I wanted to write some comment like yours,but in the end it's his track and how he wanted it to be.And I like his song like that.
Maybe the first 45 seconds don't anounce ideally the main part,even if it's very nice on itself,nice work.

 

After a few days break..... wow, what a mess! There's at least three tracks in there, all disconnected. Synths used were probably Serum, Avenger, Alchemy and Fathom. I was forcing myself to use synths I had bought.