Okay! Chill.
In @DaVa-67's post, comment #7, it clearly says: "Xupito said". And all the words are in a box, including the muzak reference.
Why should I not think you wrote it?
And how would anybody know that, according to @DaVa-67, he/she wrote it?
I mean, c'mon!

 

Well, there's my original post. And later in another:

It's alright, we have different ways but no offense taken at all.

 

What does "forgot to close my quote" mean?
And why is someone else's quote part of your quote?

 

Keep calm Lads!

 

I'M F*ING CALMED!!!!!

Now seriously, I've already stopped trying. Onto other things now.

 

Three Oarsome dudes in a row.

Peace Out

Love the Squid

 

Oarsome liek lawl

 

Thanks Everyone for your comments - really appreciated! Not my intention to start a dispute, though .. ;)

I basically agree with all comments about the song, but I feel I have left it behind me and maybe I will continue with it in the future with all your remarks in mind. I produce music as a theraphy after work... to clear my head and fill it with some artistic and creative thinking and feelings, to clear all thinking that is required in the formalized world within my profession.

So I have a new tune ongoing and hope that I'm not starting a new dispute for asking about comments for this one:

 

Nice one JTSD! It is a good song. I guess we all differ in the way we like our music produced & mastered LOL
P.S I just noticed your second song. I definitely prefer the vocals on this one. keep up the good work

 

Haha! U guys have been busy here.

Re. 'auto-tune' misunderstandings some have, here's a quote from recycle that proves that we usually use the phrase for the T-Pain effect,; not subtle, single syllable correction. I feel we were talking at cross-purposes.

Incidentally, I can safely say that the early Coldplay stuff had a few usages of it; totally undetectable even though I know.
Same with the James Blunt stuff.
I doubt there are any pop music vocals over the last 20 years that haven't had it used on a syllable at least!
As I said, the op's vocal is universally pitch-shifted. That's the most noticeable effect. I can't believe people can't hear that.

 

Last edited: Jul 1, 2019

Picked up this one again and this is the final version

 

I don't like the rythm of that drum beat, imo doesn't fit, in any version you shared here,

....but I'm a drummer so I guess I take those things too seriously

 

I quite like the vocal performance and the way it's introduced in your 1st version. The autotune is part of the style you aim at I suppose, I don't mind. I prefer this lead vocal to the male one on the original song ----->

Your first version is a cool base but I would try and find something more interesting to add after 1:38
Your "final" one I don't like it. I agree with @tzzsmk about the beat.
Guitar and bass don't harmonically fit either @0:54 and on other occasions for instance.

 

@tzzsmk : Drums on tracks are my weakness, I basically choose whatever fits best atm from my sample library and never review the choices. Thanks!

@Arsenal : Sounds like I used identical "Royalty free" vocal samples as "Suicide Sheep" did (never heard of them nor the song you posted), but "Suicide Sheep" transposed the vocals down to a lower (male) key, and I agree that it sounds better. Thanks!