You're the best.

 

You shouldn't worry about such things. Those are the wrong reasons. Feedback from peers and friends etc.. is important though.

 

You gotta speak this shit into existence. You think stars got to where they were by getting pat on the head by musical geniuses. They believed in their craft

I bet most you are stagnating.. I'm on the up. Hence the boldness of my post

 

I agree. I got a little irate..

 

I listened to it....

It sounds to me like you're being hypnotized by Fruity Loops. We've all been there. Now, you must learn to detatch your emotions from a "finished" or unfinished product. If you have ""it"", then you will come up with 1,000 other ideas in the future (that you also feel passionate about) with zero problems, and from a more musically mature perspective.

You're just growing up 'musically', Now, work on your musicianship skills.

 

None of the advice from the old losers is positive or constructive. Just happy to shit on people's stuff

 

Being black has nothing to do with primitive music. That's not what I meant. Don't make it a race issue....

 

To be honest, the melody line is pretty dope. However, everything else doesn't feel creative at all. There is no variety, no B section to the song which doesn't help it bounce. I don't feel the bounce of this track as everything seems to move too robotically. It's an okay start but you shouldn't feel like this is finished.

 

Listen, you're terrible and your music is terrible. Trap and EDM are two terrible musical genres that you will be horrified to be associated with in about two years when everybody grows up and moves on to listen to real music. Remember "nu-metal"? Trap and EDM are worse. If your goal was to make everybody who listened to your one-finger "look at me, I'm a pwa-do-sah!" loop horseshit feel bad about themselves for having clicked on your asshole link, mission accomplished. Also, stop pretending to be black -- I think it's pretty obvious from your shitty track that you're as white as uncooked rice. If you're interested in being in the music business at this point, you should probably start learning how to give a decent blowjob, because I'm pretty sure that's the only chance you have left. Otherwise, ask your boss at Hardee's if he can give you some extra shifts.

 

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You're a g

 

What a gay response. Something a chick would write tf

 

For all intents and purposes, this is the beginning of a work=in=progress. It needs no explanation.

 

Was just playing

 

I already thought so...

 

The more you keep calling people who respond to you "gay", the more obvious it is that you're really just looking for a date. But that's good! You're going to need all the blowjob practice you can get, because you sure as hell aren't going to make it in the music industry based on your talent! And before you ask, no, nobody here is interested.

 

Asking people to judge then cry like a little girl. Classic. Oh I only judge your class 0 class mate.

 

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man your beat so dope why dont you post that track you have with Drake, Nicki and Cardi .. right

 

Some very entertaining posts (apart from the ones form OP), I really laughed myself to tears, my thanks to the contributors.

I'm still waiting for the thread to be closed, though (just too much insults and this whole thread will lead to nothing).

 

Silence it already

 

Alright cool sorry everyone I've messed with