Misty (Original Mix)

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  1. Oleksandr

    Oleksandr Ultrasonic

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    Quite nice.

    The accordion is much too loud and the very high cutted snare is very unusual (sounds too much like noise, imho)
     
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  4. Oleksandr

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    I changed that percussion, and lowered the accordion.:wink:
     
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    Sadly the accordion ruins the entire song, why is it so loud and how did you not notice?
    other than that and many other things it could be a nice little tune, maybe the main melody could use a bit of improvement, but it's not bad.

    also you could add some more automations/unique stuff on some parts of the song to make it "less boring". right now it feels like you used legos to make it, if you get what i mean. there's basically pattern A, then pattern B, repeat this and that, etc. etc. just to spice up things otherwise it gets boring quickly.

    i'm sorry this is not the feedback you were looking for but i listened to the song and well good luck on your next one. was this some kind of tropical house attempt?

    cheers
     
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    Nice tune... Accordion is still too loud... And i agree with the rest of @Backtired feedback... It has the potential to go much further... Develop it!
     
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  7. Oleksandr

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    Every feedback is welcome.This track was done in one day,i am not saying that you can't make decent tracks in one day but this was version 1.0.I don't have that much time since i am working 12 hours a day.Today i was at home so i did basic mixing, i lowered the accordion and changed the clap.

    https://instaud.io/2SuK
     
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    Oleksandr, Nov 3, 2018
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    The changes are too small, imho. I'd raise the plug lead sound starting at 1:32 a bit (maybe 1,5dB) and adjust the accordion to the same perceived level. These are alternating lead sound which should be audible equally.

    The snare has still no attack sound.
     
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  9. Oleksandr

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    Well i will play with this project for a while and see what will happen.
     
    Oleksandr, Nov 4, 2018
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    Accordeon should go down around 4db and sidechain it with kick drum to give it more energy
     
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