Here is my first track, I want to share.
Produced from 0. /w vocalist from Armada music.



what do you think?

 

Some notes:
1- the track is a bit harsh on high frequencies (de-ess de master maybe?), or overall too much high end.
2- did you remove the side bass?
3- try compressing the bass area.
4- nice track , I hope it goes as you wish.

Love,
D.

 

Good one man! love the vocals... Mix seems like it needs some work...but i cant comment specifically what ...im listening on cheap headphones and your low end seems too loud... possibly too much stereo spread and volume? And i think the vocals need more definition... But, like i said...cheap headphones... My feedback maybe incorrect...

Love the song...

 

Hey, @GodHimSelf !
Thank you for review
1. May be, my Yamaha HS5, can lie a little bit! Will do it slightly)
2. for sure, bx_digital v3 default preset, mono 0-120Hz
3. Yeah, that's the idea to delete this xtra woofing!
4. Thank you so much
Definitely will do this!

 

@Kinghtsurfer if 2 guys talk about it, that's a mistake I guess.
Thank you for the review!

 

As Kinghtsurfer said, the vocal is a bit drowned, try putting a sidechain for the middle and high freqs.

D.

 

it doesn't sound harsh to me. i love the sounds and the vibe. the vocal sounds wonderful.

 

Usually not my type of genre, but I listend til the End. It's interesting to listen to

Great Stereo Imaging! Sounds pretty official.

Just 4 little notes:
I miss a little more smack in the snare/claps (maybe increase attack time?)
The reverby double snares before the middle section and right before the last part ar bit too loud.
I'd tame the the bass a bit in the upper lows. Sounds a bit too growly
I Like the airy Vocals, but maybe add some low mids to give them a bit more solid body. They sound a bit "fragile"

 

I'm not qualified to comment on the technical aspects of the song so I'll just say I think it sounds great. Nothing in the song is out of place or annoying and it's pleasant to listen to!

 

What is a sidechain?

 

I don't like the melodic motif in between, but the sung parts are really good.

 

This was made with a remix pack, right?

 

A sidechain is when you strap the miss to bed and then go out partying with your friends

 

its good meng.
just some fine tooth comb the main things are spot on..

 

Yeah, I'll check that claps/snares tips! I guess bigger attack time will work pretty good!
About "fragile" This girl vocal is very low (I mean her vocal range is in the lower octaves), so if I add a little bit of body, it's just make it Ultra-Muddy For sure may be that's my mistake, and I add/cut to much still I tried it previously, without any good result
Thank You so much for checking, and writing review, I marked all your ideas and will definitely try them at studio!)

 

Nope, we just have a fb chat, then Skype-call , and decide to try our Collab :D

 

Thank you!
Previously we have an idea to create a full Chorus, but EDM Labels nowadays, don't like that, and want to hear. Intro-Verse-Drop-Verse-Drop-Outro structure in almost 100% of production.
One more time thank you for your thoughts!

 

Thank you! Glad you like it!

 

Maybe try parallel processing on her vocals. Parallel compress the vocal on na bus boost the low end with a shelf, cut the highs and mix it into the vocal. Gives you more control than just equing

 

sounds like a plan!