Something new..or so

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by brometheus, May 13, 2018.

  1. brometheus

    brometheus Noisemaker

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    Hello everyone
    I used to make music for video games but kinda felt a limit to that, well...not that i was good at it XD
    and recently got hooked into Future Bass/Lo Fi and its "subgenres"

    So tell me what u think about my tracks, no matter how harsh your opinion can be
    Also, u can download these tracks free of charge (link in the descrition of each track)

    Enjoy and have a sweet day!! <3
     
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  3. safran5020

    safran5020 Platinum Record

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    Hi @brometheus

    This is not my type of music but I think they all sound good and you use nice and interesting sounds. We can clearly year your video game experience and influence in "Memories"

    I think the bass should follow your chords/arpegio in "Snowy" rather than staying mono chord all the way.

    "Long Time Ago" is a good start for something maybe more scalable/evolutive with more expression and again maybe a little less static.

    My general comment would be : "I appreciated listening to your tracks and keep on doing what you do and have fun doing what you like" !

    :wink:
     
  4. EddieXx

    EddieXx Audiosexual

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    hi, i listened and I can only say continue and make more. your path is already set, you mix very well, have good ideas, and apply your knowledge to the extent where it is at this moment.

    there is nothing worth criticising about your tracks, they are perfect for what they are.
    see them like pages in a book of verses, just continue.

    your next versers will keep getting better entrenching your knowledge and helping you gaining more. by the time you must buy a new book you will be great.

    very promising.
     
  5. No Avenger

    No Avenger Moderator Staff Member

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    I could well imagine a soft, slow e-bass with Long Time Ago and I would change the mixes of the other two, but in principle, that's not bad at all. :yes:
     
  6. stoiximan

    stoiximan Platinum Record

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    Memories was awesome and the clarity of the sound was great.I think you have good potential keep working my friend.
     
  7. brometheus

    brometheus Noisemaker

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    haha, very sweet comments from u guys <3
    first of all i must apologise for my late reply, was away for a couple of days from home :P

    so @safran5020 & @No Avenger
    You are right, Long Time Ago is kinda monotonic, i was aiming for kinda LoFi/Grime'ish wannabe track, but maybe ill do somechanges and repost it. On Snowy too, after a couple of listens, it gives an odd sound to the whole track
    From the Memories track u think that i was making those kind of chiptunish tracks before...well, no XD
    Here, take a listen to what i was making

    @EddieXx & @stoiximan
    Thanks a lot for the encouragement!!!

    Im still a researcher for my own sound and have a lot to learn and fail upon :3
    Cheers
    Have a sweet day!!!!
     
  8. No Avenger

    No Avenger Moderator Staff Member

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    Aha, that's good!. Could use a bigger climax at the end (low & dangerous brass, second violins), but it's good.
     
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