little ariana remix on the fly....

https://clyp.it/4ykl3uua

 

I like that you've made it a more downtempo version. I like the guitar riff thats playing... Good work!

Just a few suggestions (biased by my own limited perceptions)

1. Introduce more variation... Specially the rhythm (drum) section... Some fills... Some risers... Some more mute sections.

2. Also add variation to the chord/ harmony section... The singular guitar loop needs a break...

3. Dont know if its my hearing (been down with the flu) but I was missing a bottom end... In my humble opinion there needs to be a lot more bass.

Look forward to hearing more from you

 

nice words, your suggestions are all right!
my idea is to go at essential.....and is a remix on the fly....i dont have to much worked with detail's!
Have a nice week!

 

Of course... Please upload more soon!

 

here sam smith remix with same "suggestion" for your info i am 60 old young man

https://clyp.it/h3qc1lw1

 

Sorry to say but i really don't like your remix because i like it

And it's in my fav playlist

 

And forever young you shall remain!

This one is quite lovely... much variation, the piano and low end is sweet...Only the repeating guitar lick felt a wee bit out of place (personal bias purely)

The difference in level of the quiet and loud parts is a bit too much I felt... and the snare/ sidestick is a little loud for my ears. But all this is just a mix issue...

Enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!