New track ...Feedback welcome

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Mat O, Feb 11, 2018.

  1. Mat O

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  3. Kinghtsurfer

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    Wow... 9 minutes... Thats a long track...most times i find myself unable to go beyond 3.30 minutes... So good show on that front!

    A good example of an 80s background score... Like in commando (arnie) and others like it...

    The evolving bassline is my favourite feature... Like the 80s drum sound as well.

    Good job. :)
     
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  4. Sylenth.Will.Fall

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    If I was being hypercritical, I'd say slight overuse of the crash cymbal, but I love how the drums enhance the track, and aren't merely there just because everyone has them!
    For me the perfect track is one that takes you on a journey, and this fits the bill perfectly! I really love this!

    Nice one!
     
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  5. spyfx

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    @Mat O beautiful track,i can meditate with(on) this & yes it is a nice journey indeed,thanks for sharing :wink: :bow:
    imho the mix can be improved & a better master.
     
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  6. sir jack spratsky

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    good production.....liked the hypntic nature....one bass note / chord for 9 minutes is a bit beyond me though
     
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  7. Mat O

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    Guys Thanks for taking the time ...and having the patience

    Unintentional
     
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  8. Mat O

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    Thanks Man
     
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    :):wink::like:
     
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  10. Mat O

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    Thank you:wink:
    tried adding seventh and third..... and also tried harmonizing the melody.. i dropped it bcoz it gave popish kind of vibe which was not the goal... i could have tried other ways..not patient enough ...
     
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  11. Vader

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    A little bit to long, but overall a good work... And it's not even my favorite style :wink:
     
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    I liked generally. But bass is too loud for my taste. Sometimes it becomes just like a humming to me. And as I heard there's no resting parts.
     
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  13. Mat O

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    Thanks for the feedback
     
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  14. T3NR@

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    Silky smooth track, love it. The background atmosphere could be quieter, hurt my ears a little bit.
     
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  15. IllBert

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    Awesome Track! Remembers me a lot to Hinkstep.
     
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  16. Hans242

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    Hmm, I've always tried to avoid feedback on my tracks...
     
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  17. Davey Jones

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    I think the songs sounds great. Good spacing and meshing. However, for the song to be 9 minutes, there has to be constant change to maintain the attention of the audience. The bassline could've switched up and been more interesting and a few chord changes, or even a modulation point. The track has a lot of vibe and smoothness, nonetheless.
     
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  18. Mat O

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    There is feedback on this track Dly Line feeding back in to reverb and vice versa:winker:
     
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