Hi !
Here is my newest track called "SUCK" , need your opinion, criticism welcome !

 

I really like these delay-games-thing on the vocals. Nice synth sounds and nice idea with the cyms panning, too, although they lack a bit attack.
What I noticed is a very/too quick build up beginning up to 1:28 and (too) slowly changing mainpart. This seems to me somewhat unbalanced.
Especially that solo synth bar at 1:26 I would lenghten for two beats. I'm totally into that and it's really a small highlight.

 

Last edited: Dec 17, 2017

Yeah, the slow changing part is a problem, but it's been a year that I'm working on this track, and I lack objectivity...

 

BTW what do you mean by unbalanced ?

 

Too short intro (too quickly changing parts) up to 1:26, too long or slowly changing/evolving mainpart (1:28 -fin)

 

Ok thanks !
Regarding the synths I used, here is the list of my setup :
Roland cloud vst's
Massive
Yamaha DX7 MKI (1983)

 

Ha, the good old unprogrammable DX7. So, you're just using presets?

 

Easy to listen and it flows nicely .Great job

 

Where's the snare at? I was expecting massive gated 80's snare. Everything else is there.

 

nice job!

 

the dx7 is fantastic
my take on it, i think you should make the kick and snare punch a tad bit more punchy
thats it great job

fm synth rocks!

 

Last edited: Dec 17, 2017

Ahahahah yeah, good ol' preset from yamaha.

 

? Sorry did not understand ?

 

Love it. You surely nail the feel and sound. If i could poinpoint it i'd say it falls somewhere between the darker 80's Italo dance tracks up to Front 242/Nitzer Ebb industrial sound all the way to KLF. This flows nicely man, got me grooving alright. Major Dig!

 

Wow thanks a lot !!!

I love Front 242 and Nitzer Ebb !

 

sounds really nice - great job

 

Nice, love it!
Kept me interested the whole way through and even slapped it on again through the "big speakers"

 

Compare this gated snare with yours

 

My snare is not gated, just heavily compressed and limited

 

Yeah I know...... I was expecting a huge snare is all