http://soundcloud.com/iggyrot/farewell

 

Interesting work you have here, dig it very much

On personal level that glitchy drums didn't sit well in my mind, was totally there till them jump in,IMO they don't fit the whole vibe, everything was organic and hypnotic and they just came in like a bad trip or something, industrial if I need to choose a word, didn't sit well with the vibe that is introduced, was expecting some floaty deep stuff to get me further in trip, but they kinda remind me of emptiness that electronic music in most cases have.

But still good work *yes*

 

constructive reflexion, thanks for the feedback. the glitchy drums are part of the initial idea when i started the song, but maybe they doesn't fit with the aesthetics of the tune. i agree with you in the idea of emptiness in most of the electronic music, particularly in some genres.

 

Nice work!
I´m agree with the emptiness concept, but maybe the glitchy beats are not completely out from the tune´s aesthetic.
Maybe you can try leaving JUST the 100% left & right glitchy drums.
I think it can sounds weird, but when I listened to the song, the only things that 'distracted' me from the hypnotic vibe were the 'in your face' percusions in the center. Maybe you can keep the glitch approach but make it more sorrounding and ethereal, and smaller in the mix, taking it out from the center and leaving just some hihats and high stuff appearing from the sides randomly.

Greetings.