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Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Electronic Garden, Aug 24, 2012.

  1. Electronic Garden

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  3. xsze

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    To harsh sounding, to my ears very dry and that's affecting atmosphere of the track, dig the part that starts @2:45.

    Really think if you pull out better mix that whole track will be another story, filled with emotions and atmosphere.

    Everything in track sounds retro and if you pull out that rich soft analog sound,this track will be amazing, but you now have retro kinda sounds that sound digital and harsh, vocal with no emotions and life and whole mix very dry and harsh, so you catch my drift.

    For modern music, this sounds amateurish, for retro music with that analog signature all over it, another story, try both worlds, but it's hard today to pull out sounds from '80s to sound modern and popular, you must really give it special something and fill it with emotions, or you have really not so good digital amateurish track that sounds like you found some old presets from some vst and you try to pull out some new thing, if you are for retro sounds, go fully with analog feel, my honest opinion, or if you want digital sterile feel, make modern sounds and that vocal to sound more robotic :)
     
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    i hear some distortion at the very beginning, is that just me?

    maybe a byproduct of limiting and that sound was boosted too much?

    anyway, that's an easy fix!


    great vocals! TPain effect in full force!

    :)
     
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    Yes from the 0:00 to 0:06 and then from 2:20 to 2:30

    Seems like samples are to loud :grooves:

    About track: It's fine form me, but I must say I dont listen this kinda music so...
     
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    Needs better mixing and less/no auto-tune. Get to it.
     
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