http://soundcloud.com/papi-jay/papi-jay-going-out-loud

What do you think? Please share your suggestions and/or criticism with me!

Last one got bashed, but it's all good. Some useful tips and to be honest, last one was shit haha! hope y'all like this one better, it just a concept tho

 

loving the 808's (or whatever you used) for the bass! maximum bumpage!

a great start, i would just suggest changing the synth line up a bit, or leave it out for a bit to change stuff up- but of course you said it was a concept, so i forgive you!

 

thanks for listening, i will think about changing the synths up a bit, add some more variation. really appreciate you giving me some feedback, peace!!

 

Has that "Hard in the paint" feel

 

is that good or bad, do you think it has too much of 'that vibe' or does it still have it's own flava?

thanks for commenting anyway!

 

upon a second listen, i think this song would go great with an athletic type commercial as the background music, like nike or adidas or gatorade, with guys playing basketball and stuff-

and i also don't know what "hard in the paint" means either!

 

"hard in the paint"

Think Lebron James vs Celtics in game 6.

 

Good track, sounds heroic