Hey Guys,

There's a song I'm working on and so far all I have is some music. I'd love to hear your thoughts and clear my head before I move any further.
Here it is: http://playstopgo.com/temp/music/SomA-Raf.mp3

I'd appreciate any comments.

Thanks!

 

lol... without looking at the user name, I thought.. sorta sounds like Incognito's last song..

I'm diggin it.. bring on some vocals :dancing:

 

SomA-Raf... Like OR said add some vocals. I just downloaded it. It sounds great. Add some vox and if it sounds pretty good you should shoot for placement on Pandora radio. btw I downloaded it cuz ima sing to this in my bedroom - not lying.

 

Haha. Hey One Reason, I guess I'm starting to sound like me Thanks for the comment!

Hebrew, I'm glad you like it. Maybe you can upload your version of the song. I'd love to hear it! As for Pandora radio I can't access it since I'm in Canada. Maybe you can help me submit it once I'm done?

All the best guys!

 

sounds relly nice but i think the leads could have some more effects and modulations

hey, thats same fight i am into

 

haha Yeah bro, I'll do both!

 

GanjaRa, you're probably right. I'll play with it more once I have the vocal. I'm hoping to get more feedback from you then. Thanks for the constructive criticism!

Hebrew, thanks! Looking forward to it!

 

aha this sounds like greenday, lonely road except for the electro parts. the verses anyway. i can give u a tip, keep writing dance not rock.

 

Thanks Dan, I'll stay away from rock

 

Very cool stuff....Sounds very lively and vibrant ....Yeah, agreed the vocals could help to splatter / splash it more (the energy)

 

definetely not my style but it sounds quite professionally arranged/produced. sounds and effects are chosen well... good overall mixture. keep it up!

and @ "keep writing dance not rock" => .. do what you want to do! restrictions are "".

 

Thanks Rolma! I agree. Vocal should mix it up a bit.

Rimshooter, thank you for the feedback. You're absolutely right about restrictions. I just found it amusing someone would regard my music as 'rock'

 

I like this overall mix of this...sounds good.

I do concur about vocals---that would certainly enhance this.