Human (R)evolution

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Aliens, Feb 15, 2017.

  1. Aliens

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    Second song I ever wrote - The beauty to the firsts beast.

    Edit: Thanks for the listens, comments, likes and love.
     
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  3. Seedz

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    Nice lyrics moosh........all Soundcloud links are greyed out for me on here so can't add any more............Saint, mon ami, if you're reading this, can anything be done?
     
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    Nice Song! :wink:

    The end is a bit "brutal" is it wanted?
     
  5. MARJU GRLYO

    MARJU GRLYO Noisemaker

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    "Second song I ever wrote"

    Really ??? No !!! You never work for I don't know... Arrangements, co-composer, etc... ??? Never ??? Or you play an instrument ? Probably !

    Because you got a nice melodic feeling ! The music shared on forums are usually very poor melodically speaking. I mean, I don't care about Bach and such but we usually listen to weird beats and awkward melodies...
    Your notes are well chosen, times too, everything is at the right place, that's cool !
    So thank you for that ! :bow:

    I'm not sure you're waiting for a review or something so I won't do it, of course there's a few things than can be better, if it's really your second song that's normal but... Keep on writing bro ! lol We can feel the potential !
     
  6. Great! It is so funny, I wrote as part of a lyric just today the words " solar wind". It must be in the cosmic consciousness!
     
  7. artwerkski

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    ... this is actually really VERY GOOD. Period.
     
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  8. Aliens

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    Thanks for the kindness :yes:

    I should perhaps have been more clear in my opening post. While it is only the second full song I'd ever written, it was a few years ago now. Just a bit of a nostalgia moment going on.
    While that may cast a different shadow over some of the replies, like all my pieces from then 'til now, they are production wise seldom put down any cleaner or less rough and ready.
    If I can't rock, at least that's the way I'll roll. :rofl:
     
  9. Aliens

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    Either cosmic consciousness or too much late night cheese :dunno: :lmao:
     
  10. The lyric had to do with a megalomaniac, god complexed ruler of a far off planet finding the Earth with the aid of their greatest scientists in order to transplant their race because their planet is dying. He of course must cleanse the Earth before their arrival.
     
  11. Aliens

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    Sounds a fun concept, But f#ck me, he's going to need a lot of cleaning product and a mothership full of tp to cleanse this old sh1t hole :lmao:
     
  12. Fal@nd

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    Nice works.
    Are you Buddhist, maybe?
     
  13. Aliens

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    Thanks, and no, I'm a nothing. I'm The Al1en. :wink:
     
  14. Aliens

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    "One more day, one more lie, one more smile, one more wave."

    Edit: Now time for something new :yes:
     
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  15. The Alien is the message.
     
  16. Aliens

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    I don't know about that, SLS, but thanks for the SC like :wink:
     
  17. Kloud

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    Liked it a lot was cool. Nice to hear a different approach. Catchy melody, well done and cool lyrics.
    Made for good listening.
    Nice one :yes::bow:
     
  18. Aliens

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    That's kind of you, thanks :)
     
  19. The idea of believing in "the other", that that which skirts the mundane can and will open one up finally to possibilities outside of the box and in a higher understanding of that which is outside of the formal day to day reference. A belief in the magic which is kept at bay by ones rigid system of belief.
     
  20. Aliens

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    Even though we're let down frequently, as we surely are these days, I still choose to believe Humans will eventually evolve to make a difference that benefits the whole and not just the self.

    I'd get AL1 the Logic Machine on to it, but you know, the prime directive and inferior species and all that. :yes: :no:
     
  21. Zealious

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    I really liked the Message here
     
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