i made this track .
what do you think about it ?

 

2 years too late to the party.

 

You have a long way to go with mixing so just learn that first. Those chords and melodies sound like they've been used in 100 other tracks. The weak kick and harsh highs with the synth and piano should have set off your ears...

 

It needs to say " Schumacher" before the chorus.

 

You still have much to learn young Padawan

 

ok .. can you recommend me some good tutrials or guides ?

 

can you tell me how to improve myself ? maybe speciffic guides ?

 

Yes you can find a lot of tutorial on the sister site AZ

 

Start by looking in the mixing and mastering forum. Loads of good info in just the first sticky alone!

 

It sounds like my next door neighbor is listening to some crappy pop trance. I'm gonna go throw a brick through his window...

 

AZ ? dont know this site.

 

Yeah of course, If you use FL Studio youtube busyworksbeats and checkout all the FL 12 playlist. If you use Ableton goto the youtube channel sadowick productions. Come back in 6-8 months after

 

Hey there, this is a great place to get honest feedback when you really want it. But it can be brutal if you're not prepared.

The arrangement is good, there are good buildups and release so you can take some positives away with you. Some of those chords in the main drop just stay static the whole time which makes the drop sound a bit disjointed and the mix is unbalanced like others have said.

However write another one, and post it. Rinse and repeat, the secret is to keep finishing tracks. Also grab a track you like and put it in your daw and try make your songs sonically sound similar (Don't copy the song, just try make the kick sound the same, and the levels).

Write another one today

 

No where was it stated this is the first track he has ever made. In fact if you click on his soundcloud there's another older track right there. For all we know he could have ten years of production experience, but only recently started posting it online.

@OP Since no one answered you, AZ is AudioZ search for it. It has tons of tutorials and other goodies for us audiophiles.

 

@Funk U , I definitely understand where you're coming from. It's possible he has been producing for much longer. It's just that, I kind of see time and time again that someone posts something commercial up for review and suddenly it's no longer about the song itself, it's about so many other things. That's gotta stop.

We gotta build each other up is all. There's a reason I'm on this forum as opposed to the other ones, I like it here.

 

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I changed the wording a little bit on my first reply. Hope that helps clarify what I mean.

 

I mostly agree to the others that you need to practice more and a lot, but after listening to your first production I can tell that you are still on a better track than many others. Keep practicing, even if sometimes you may feel you are getting worse as it is almost always up and down in the short run, but in the long run improvement is inevitable. Be passionate about producing music and the rest will follow...

 

Being a producer is not just generating sounds. Is being able to discern if your track is good enough, when you must consider the track finished (compromise between your current skills and the set target) and have a good taste in music.

I don't care if he's a kid or if my first track was worse than his. At least I had the decency not to put it out there and look for a feedback because I had a good enough taste to know that it was simply sub standard. And the same for the next dozens.

Furthermore, if the OP is really young, it's even more strange that he can't follow the latest trends in commercial dance music (which is the easiest thing to do for a young person). One of the biggest issues of producers (and DJ's) is to attach too much to a fading genre and become obsolete.

So yes, I think we are doing him a favour by telling him that a product that he has in store is expired. I, for sure, would appreciate to know that.

 

@jayxflash is it okay for me to pm you? You seem like a reasonable person and I would much rather prefer direct dialogue rather then turn this into a public pissing contest.