Downtempo/Chillout Track

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by JJ-BK, Apr 21, 2012.

  1. JJ-BK

    JJ-BK Newbie

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    Hey, so I've just signed up and I thought I'd share one of my recent tracks......all criticism welcomed *yes*





    http://soundcloud.com/nightdroid/lizards-downtempo-instrumental
     
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  3. anton

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    I'm sorry but you use the wrong chords for the other stuff (bass and other sounds). It sounds false :/
     
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    Ah okay man thanks for the feedback. What exactly sounds "False" about the chords etc etc?
     
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    The chords by themselves are good. But they don't match the other melodies
    I think it is quite obvious.
    If you know how to play those piano chords, then i don't understand how you can get the other stuff wrong. i'm guessing you use loops?

    Ask anyone else that have a musical ear.
    I'm not trying to troll you.

    good luck man.
     
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    lol
     
  7. JJ-BK

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    No man I don't use loops, I programmed the sounds myself. I understand what your getting at with the sounds not going well with each-other maybe it's to do with taste, or maybe not. Thanks for the feedback, this stuff helps :)
     
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