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It is interesting and bring to me the realization that all of the music that you have posted and that I have listened to evokes strong visual images in my mind. This one is about being a passenger in a small black car as I sit in the front passenger seat, driving through a city in Eastern Europe and watching the people, streets and buildings go by until we hit the edge of the city and enter a more rural surrounding. The entire time the driver is smoking a cigarette and talking non-stop, but I am not really listening but rather in a dream state, uncaring and relaxed as the scene progresses and the time passes slowly by. Interesting.

 

Unusual vision of my music! Thank you!

 

Interesting indeed,i like it.
Just one thing you might consider,to get the synths more under control with some level adjustments and a bus compressor,get them synths down a notch and bring up the drums which sound quite good,a few small corrections would make it sound even better
Visually you remind me of the artwork artist/genius Ed Unitsky from Ukraine.

 

Thanks for the advice, Von_Steyr! Just sometimes difficult to deal with my laziness! Special thanks for Ed Unitsky!

 

This sounds like a movie soundtrack to the good guy getting away from two chasing KGB agents and the good guy getting away in a small jet plane, sitting back, sipping a champers and smiling

 

very uncoventional sound! something very original is much much apprecciated

 

Miss vocals in my opinion - it's very interesting as it is, but it will be greater with (my thoughts go to some Tom Waits, Nick Cave or a Bowie like story-telling style wörtspiele or maybe some movie quotes samples...)

 

In my opinion it's difficult to integrate vocals on a piece like this. I would leave it like it is.
Adding vocals would distract the listeners from the music. I like experimental, non conventional music. This piece evokes for me rather a wild lush tropical jungle, populated with dangerous animals like snakes, spiders, crocodiles...they're moving and lurking around....
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Hi Cook! I share your point of view concerning conventional music, I don't like it that much too... but the fact is vocals can be used with creativity, (providing that it is done cleverly) in experimental music and I recognize that it can be difficult, but surely not impossible to include in. "Collapse" reminds me a lot of Goblin (profondo rosso, suspiria, zombie), maybe you know this Italian cult band, and the "Inferno"'s works from Keith Emerson but I stay on this impression that it's missing something, perhaps not vocals if you please, some settings in the arrangement to get this extra something...
It's just my advice, no-one has to follow it.
The choice belongs to Ptahin anyway

Ptahin, Thank you for sharing your track, it was a pleasure to hear it

 

Never heard about it and I'm of Italian origins... but always lived abroad so i cannot know them.
In return i know some *bizarre* groups like BAUHAUS (video above) or "Einstürzende Neubauten"
which have made great non conventional music.
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Love them, I have done a cover of The three shadows part 3 notably... and Neubauten, with Blixa who played alongside of Nick Cave for sure, I'm a goth so yes.. I do know them amongst others ;)

 

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Wow really like this one

 

Thank you all for a good conversation!

 

Very Nice Track, Digging this Vibe @Ptahin ! Very Cool!

 

I agree. In my opinion, the synths more than compensate for any phrasings that vocals would contribute to the overall flow and fluctuations within this piece. To my ears, this is a pure "instrumental" construct, and that is a good thing. There are occasions when vocals might enhance, but not in this case.

 

And it would be interesting if someone agreed to sing!

 

Sure, In a way that I have suggested it... I can always try. It doesn't cost anything and the result as you said would be interesting