Completing the songs

Discussion in 'Education' started by foster911, Apr 3, 2016.

  1. foster911

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    Without further explanation, just an odd request:

    Could someone please make at least an 1 minute track from below FLP (fruity loops 12.3) file?
    I made it but want big clues for completing it.
    Thanks so much!
     
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  3. kouros

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    Use your theories, tables and software.
     
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  4. Herr Durr

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    @foster911 ok pink panther.. I'll give them a whirl.. but alas I don't really use fl studio.. so you only get the feedback


    update: it's an ok snippet, similar to the other ones you have posted, you want others
    to complete a track for you ? why don't you ( agreeing with @kouros ) use your resources
    you have obtained and make a completed track for people to react to..

    I'll be surprised if anyone loads this up and finishes a track.... but we'll see...

    maybe @Steve Faoki can give you some pointers.... :unsure:
     
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  5. Funk U

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    I'll do it. But only if you finish MY math homework first. Because nothing says I've learned something more than when i read the book, then turn around and have someone else do the work for me.
     
  6. foster911

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    Hi there!
    Unfortunately there is not a chapter like that in the theory books.
    Yes, would seem similar. Without adding the adornments, even Selena may look like Justin. Btw, it is just the main theme that I combined similar sounds together just for testing how 2 different melodies would be placed next to each other without inconsistency.

    As you know, Audioz or even Youtube are full of EDM related materials, but mine is different (not saying good or bad). I have listened to huge number of projects already but I need someone to think like my style.
     
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  7. foster911

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    OK! good deal.
     
  8. kouros

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    That's what everyone's been telling you since last year when you decided to begin your quest for nonsense.

    I still think you would be much better off as a music listener only.
     
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  9. Herr Durr

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    @foster911 there are some tutorials available on FL studio that go from start to finish creating a track and final mix etc...

    My suggestion, just do the process regardless of the result, so you at least have that down. Then as you add to your knowledge
    you can ( possibly ) make it better, by applying your theories ....,

    but I seriously.... ah well.. that's enough :cool:
     
  10. The Teknomage

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    How did I know this thread was started by you. If your style is so different, the only person who can think in it is you! If someone else finishes it for you it's not exactly yours any more, is it? I did say to concentrate on producing something instead of theorizing all the the time, and I posted a helpful link for you, but alas I do believe it was deleted because someone didn't understand the intention behind some of what I'd said, and thought I was bullying you.

    I hope no one will agree to finish the track for you. I'm not being nasty, this is the teacher side of me coming out. You need to finish this yourself. Now, yourself doesn't mean alone. When you get stuck on something there's plenty of people here to help you, but make sure you ask in the right way. This means doing things like putting the word "How" at the beginning and a "?" at the end. That way it doesn't look like you're making some bizarre statement.

    Back to producing: As this is your 1st track it will be far from perfect, because perfect does not exist, when it comes to your own music.

    So, here's a link to help you, and I leave you with this message:" Less thinking and theorizing: More producing."

     
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  11. Aliens

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    Some can, some can't. Some do, some don't. Some will, some won't.

    If you have the talent it's easy. If you have nothing, that's all you'll ever end up with.
     
  12. foster911

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    Sorry guys for this disappointing sentence. I posted it before but repeating it again:

    ..."The vexing part of my musical life is not being able to interconnect the classic and the modern paradigms. I feel some times that meditating on either of them, makes different humans from us.
    Do you see contradictions between them? How to overcome that problem? Do you believe in rehashing?"...


    Most producers do not have this problem because they breathe in the modern atmosphere. Please listen to below audio. The producers tend to spend their time sitting behind their DAWs or playing with their instruments. But what do they produce or play? This audio? Of course not.

    I have been stuck in the middle of the past and the future.

    [​IMG]
     

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    Would you study how to bake a cake in order to fix your car?

    Then why the hell you insist in studying genres that have nothing to do with the electronic stuff that you want to do?


    We're in a loop here, all we can think now is that you're a troll. If you're not, then you're pretty much dumb or/and stubborn.
     
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  14. kouros

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    Also, why would you call it "completing" when you barely even started it? All my draft ideas recorded into my phone have more material than this.

    Do you know why you can't see the similarities between your thing and Scarlatti (not the actual snippet)? Because there are none.


    Try to be more humble, you might learn something that way. You want to compose music while attempting to remove the actual compositional process.. that's why you should keep being just a listener. Maybe one day you'll have the spark to do your own stuff but this clearly isn't the time for that.

    Go solve some math problems and stay away from meth.
     
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    Come on mods ... it's about time you step up and do something about these two idiots (Foster911 and Steve Faoki)
     
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    It has a very synth-pop sound to it, which I noticed in your other stuff. With that in mind I'd be inclined to take out the low end on the kick. Too much boom there. Try it with an electronic style thud or even run a band pass filter on the one you have. The intro comes in too quick and has too much going on. Bring things in bit by bit and try not to have everything going on at once. Bring things in while taking other things out.
    I must say I'm not too keen on the plucky synth sound, as it sounds brash. A little attack might help tone it down a bit. Now you have something to work on. Let's see the next upload a bit longer say 2 minutes.
     
  19. kouros

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    :facepalm:


    For starters, having one more part would be great. At least to make ABA form of some sort, not AAAAAAA.

    Also, you could stop using the same chord progression and the same melodic rhythm in everything.


    Forgetting about the "need a PhD to make a song" would help immensely.
     
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  20. foster911

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    A bit longer but still repetitive.
    https://audiosex.pro/threads/fosters-new-mini-track.24562/
     
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