I like it. and I think it is your best track so far.
don't worry about inappropriate criticism by so called professionals.

all my points of criticism have already been mentioned.
we're learning day for day... keep it up!

 

Thanks guys! Lot of stuff to take in consideration here.
I think I`m going to do a lot of EQing, sound shaping and tweaking tomorrow and I will also experiment with some variation on the arps and maybe some other clips to add a little more groove to the whole thing.
Cause this one has a special meaning to me and because this is basically the first result that came out of this moment, I´m going to keep the version with the tweaks and better mix I`ll do tomorrow for myself.

BUT I will do a shorter version with some added parts and a new arrangement for you guys, so you can see for yourself if your advice is leading me somewhere or not. This also gives me the chance to get further feedback and advice on my production, which hopefully helps me to even get more ideas and improvement!

Cheers everyone!

 

Well atleast i'm not a monkey.

 

With a brilliant comeback like that, I can see why you are a multi-platnium record producer.