What's up Audiosex?
I find this forum very helpful with persons like "baxter" that always ready to help.
Thank you!!
I make remake for this track I see their video on youtube and it's simple...
Make 4-5 leads on 2 different octaves and put a lot of dada life "sausage fattener" plugin...
if you want the presets send me p.m it's all sylenth1.
can you give me some tips how to make it 100% remake hahaha...
Thank you!
New one remake thanks to "index" and "Sonar Sounds":
http://soundcloud.com/ori-lizer/dubvison-broken-ori-leiizer-remake-v-2
The orginal Track:
http://soundcloud.com/ori-lizer/dubvison-orginal
(Download allow for WAV quality)

 

Mmm... To me, the original has much more ''punch'', especially the kick drum which is a lot more bassy and has a neat attack (be careful with the sausage fattener because it acts as a limiter and takes the transients out of the drums). Also, your lead sounds too much saw-ish, which means the different layers are not well blend together
Hope this helps

 

I think your bass is an octave too high (or maybe EQing it differently might help) and the layered lead synth(s) could need more (deep) notes and/or some unision.
In Vengeance packs like essential house vol2 should be many similar kicks and it sounds like several different hihats were layered over the kick.
And I'm not 100% sure what you're trying to say with:

 

The bass is at the correct octave maybe I need to put other bass in the low octave I will chick it....
The kick are sample from the original track I will try to make it more punchy...
And I try to say that the percussion that I put hare not so good like the original so can you help me to improve it?
You can hear it hare 2:49 this percussion very common on the progressive tracks!!
http://soundcloud.com/murtaghmusic/hook-n-sling-vs-axwell-tokyo-by-night-murtagh-remix-1
I don't know if it's samples or synth it's very difficult to hear it....
And as the leads when you say "saw-ish" what did you mean?
My friend said me that I need more high end... did you mean to it?
Thank you for your help I must to get their sound!!

 

Saw-ish means that you can distinguish the saw sound in the lead. In progressive house/big room (the genre this song belongs to) almost every lead has a saw element in it (mostly a super saw), but with yours it's too basic and doesn't blend well with other layers of the lead. To repair, try to give it some detune/spread and a little reverb. If you're working on Sylenth1, use the spread knob, if you're on Massive, try the detune section and some dimension expander/reverb. However, remember that getting the perfect sound requires years of work and practice

 

Hahahhaha... I know I know.... but Dubvison is not perfect sound... David Guetta is perfect sound!
I believe that with more works and patience and of course your help I get their sound.
Your feedback help a lot it's sound better now!!!
"Index" I add sub to the bass so now it's sound great thank you!
I upload new one so can you take a listen?
http://soundcloud.com/ori-lizer/dubvison-broken-ori-leiizer-remake-v-2

 

Perfect!! I think you nailed it, and in all honesty I'd say it's even better than the original (it has more high end frequencies and a steady punch on the kick which make the track more clear and less ''washed out'' than the original *yes* ). PM me if you need something else, I'd be glad to help